The Indecision of a Daisy.
There we sit
Such a picturesque day
I lean over to say
But I am silenced with your touch
People walk past
Mumbling nothings
I go to say something
But those sharp beautiful eyes don't go away
The flowers laugh and sway
They look at me and say
'He loves you'
'He loves you not'
The people have a foreign laughter
I don't understand
He takes my hand
All the people fly away
I've already read everything -> just amazed by the form, the simplicity and at once creativity! Not many people looking at the world like you remained, I think. Great job done:)
ReplyDeleteEl poema verdaderamente expresa tus emociones, y eso es por que lo tiene tan fuerza.
ReplyDeleteI love it. Looking forward to reading more.